he’s not going to eat them, he just wants to be warm and loved :(
SO MISUNDERSTOOD

Tragic but also kind of silly and amusing. I liked it, the poor little snake. Did I read that right that the snake is at the point of being a little suicidal?

nice job you did, giving a completely different vantage point of the exactly same scenario as your other story.

I like the rhymes and how they fit in and add up to a cohesive story. And I like the creative perspective (the snake’s point of view:) Nice work.

The poor thing! I loved this all the way through, it had a beautiful flow. The way you balanced story with rhyme and humor with emotion was crafty, indeed!

chuckling

Oh my god fishmaster you are the quizads haterack. I think this poemis really one of your best works of art.

What a cute little poem. Well done.

Nicely done. I like the perspective.

I love the way it reads.