Comments on This is the life by JC Tovil

JC Tovil

http://blog.adegga.com/cork-stamps/
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
THX 0477

Lovely moment, and I like that the story takes an ebb and flow sort of arc as we feel his anger and resentment fade away. Some of the sentences in the middle bit felt too long, but I couldn’t really say if they are ‘run on’ or not. Just a feel sort of thing.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Bob Liddil

Great stamp choice. Bravo.

Bellissimo!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
JC Tovil

THX 0477 – Thank you. Tried to rewrite the middle a bit to not make the almost run on sentences :)

Bob – Thank you. The stamp picked me!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Tina Murphy

Thought you were spot on with how a disengaged child would feel about an absentee parent leaving them something.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5