A poem entry to the challenge. That feels like cheating, if you ask me. Still, it’s a lovely message in a unique rhythm, which is cool.

well now i’ve done both, and poetry lends itself naturally to no repeats, while my prose was quite lame. :P

Quit sublime! I loved your rhyme.

You used the word “In”.. Twice.

and time.. but i fixed it.

What a neat way to meet the challenge, simultaneously making uplifting remarks.

WOW YOU ARE NIFTY AND YOU MULTI TASK AWESOME.

The simple rhyme and vocab juxtaposes the complex nature of grief. It ain’t easy.

my screen was messed up i meant thrifty and i didnt know the caps were on. it was genuine