You’re turning lyrical exercises into fictional poetry at this point. I hesitate to comment for fear of interrupting your train of thought. So well conceived.

Glad you thought it was nifty. To be honest I truly don’t know where to go from here. What’s there after the universe, besides unattainable total oblivion?
Wait, maybe I do have an idea.

Cool, zxvasdf! I liked:
“I strobed across the sea of stars, disintegrating within the hearts of suns,”
I could realy imagine a being doing this.
Also liked: “My children had spread through the cosmos in a dream of themselves.”