Ooh— love is intoxicating, and also negative. Yay.
One thing. The structure of your first two verses differs from the third. As in, in the first two stanzas, the fourth line is shorter than the others (in beats), whereas in the third it seems to be longer, which threw me off slightly.
Otherwise fantastic. =D Valentine’s is a strange day anyway.
One thing, if you were meaning to put italics on the last line, place _ on either side of what you write.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
D.E DeWitt
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))