Well that was dark and horrid. It makes for a lot of potential though as he comes off a suicidal moment to take a job. That second sentence is a fragment and threw me for a bit—might have worked better as a clause.

Gwahaaah! That’s the noise of someone who has fallen in love with this new turn. New characters always have to blow me away or I can’t like them and this dude, he is so fucked in the head I can’t evem fathom. Killing myself can wait until someone else dies. Hahaha. Epic, MJ. Really.

I commiserate with Armando…have felt this way a time or two. Then live beats down your door and makes you take part in the everyday. I like Armando and your dark story.

Hey tina you have to read the others this isn’t a dark story…it’s a love story.

OK M-JY, I’m still working on reading the backlog of everyones work. SO many, so little time…I’ll try to catch up.

Hey to all three of the fans who follow this series, Pandore Jae will be coming out the newest installment to this series, soon. please stay soon same bat time same bat channel.

NOW I get it M-JY! Didn’t realize this was a new characher in the love story. Mmmm. This does create a problem for our new cyber-human lady.

drippizzled? You inspire me. Sorry haven’t read the ficlet yet, will continue now…