deep, and thought provoking…. very real and yet fantastical— much like how the mind works when dreaming or even daydreaming. I’m a fan :)

Yep, twisting and turning and a “hmm, okay” moment at the end. That’s a poem.

What? I’m no poetry expert.

That is what I love about poetry. It can be about expression of emotion through words where the words don’t need a concise motive, but perhaps just a flimsy thought. I find both of your comments entertainingly different and enjoyable. Tad, thank you. I wrote this while daydreaming. I’m glad it rubbed off.