Ew, brutal and the fall begins into being a vampire. Great conclusion to the story.

I love how you expressed this in a brutally realistic and seedy way, rather than than romantising it as most other vampire fiction would have. The cocaine reference and her giddy laughing was a really nice touch, like the blood was giving her something like a drug-induced high.

Thanks. I’m really happy with how this thread turned out.

Well, I usually don’t enjoy vampire stories considering how they are written these days. This, however, was great! I loved it. I agree with everything the others said.