The limit has kept me from including any visible signs of the alien ships. I could imagine them turning to Stealth Mode when they saw our machine-reliant society, so perhaps their ships would not be visible at all, save for a a sliver of light at wrong angles, or a patch of dark where there used to be a star. Certainly not observable to a person whose home planet just became a big blob of lava goo.

Very cool. I like the quiet, isolate tone as he reverently watching the end of it all. There’s a certain zen-like acceptance of his predicament and how little he can do about it. Very nicely done.

thanks for the comment THX.:D I really appreciate it. really.

Personally, I like this one very much, because it’s not so far fetched to think of the world crumbling. I dedicate this then to all who have seen their homes affected by the tsunami. May they get better.:|