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Jae always the bridemaid huh?
awesome story..
The water licking her toes gave me…umh..umh.. a warm feeling?
pure poetry man that was just word candy for the mind a severe sweettooth.
a gazillion stars.

oh my. So sad. Beautiful monologue; dreary outcome. TRUE love doesn’t end that way… I’m sure of it.

Haunting. Reminds me of the movie “Water” (I) (2005) were a simular action is taken when a groom has left the bride at the alter. Brava!

Are you familiar with Virginia Woolf and the story of her life? The ending to this story of yours has me wondering if she was inspiration in any way. V.W. is/was incredible. I recommend her fiction and love letter correspondences.