Thanks. :) I appreciate you taking the time to show your appreciation. And yeah, I know what you mean…I think that’s partly because the rythm is a little off in some parts and/or a tad unique, and partly because a lot of my poetry is more lyrical/song-like than anything, so in my head, it’s got music. shrug IDK, but like I said, thanks!

There were a couple great lines in this! I particularly liked
and I hate to seem uncaring, but the
only place it’s raining is over your parade
And the entire last stanza was great, too!

I could see this being put to music.