Yup, another Muse song I LOVE. It just might explain all the senseless violence in the Middle East.

Here is the link to the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebfbjdF9K5o

Very cool story. It has a simplicity of language that works absolutely. Nice choice of song, too – “Knights of Cydonia” made my shortlist for this challenge.

Bizarre and tortured, as you probably meant it to be. A bit hard to follow at times, but again that was likely intentional or just a matter of course for a story about bodily possession. Another dramatic entry into the challenge.

yeah muse is the shiszt i love em too.

Echhouse, “Knights of Cydonia” would have been cool yet the video kept interfering with a storyline. I guess I write with simplicity of language and I’m glad it works. I’ve actually been accused of being TOO descriptive so ficly makes me cute it to the bone.

THX, Thanks! Bizarre and tortured is perfect! Please TELL me where it was hard to follow. I did do a rewrite so see if that helped clear things up.
Mighty-Joe, Thanks, I would give MUSE’s music a HUGE smooch if I could. They are the BEST!