Writing this for the sake of it. It’s 12:53am local time and I’m having fun.XD I don’t know if I should keep the last line or not, though.

If this is not up to par, feel free to bypass it.:D

Late hour authorship is good for the mind. It brings out ideas not normally entertained by the alert brain.

Thought provoking and data heavy entry. It’s conclusion leaves way for an interesting bevy of potential sequels.

The word “mu” got me stuck for a bit there, but after some research I think it’s a fine word choice and a worthy addition to my personal lexicon.

I agree with your doubts with the last sentence. It’s a confusing contradiction: “time could not pass” and “before” throws the sentence off as before implies the passage of time.

I meant for it to mean “He could not perceive time passing”, but the character limit was against me. So I just wrote that.

Thanks for the comment:D I really appreciate it.

I’m still not sure with what to do with the last sentence. Perhaps change “before” to “until”?

oh-kay?

I’ll keep reading…

(Nice to see the original author take the reins once again.)

You’re punny, mr. M.