Comments on Am I Still Your Charm or Am I Just Bad Luck? by theboysimean

.:Band Baby:.

haha, soooo true.
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nicely told! i really like the POV and everyything
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
OrangeOreos (LoA)

I liked this opening. The second-person POV was a nice touch, too! I sense something bad is coming…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Music-Hearted

Firstly, I love the song “Swing Life Away”.

Next, I really like this. It’s always nice when second-person works, and you so accurately describe the simplicity of being a child… and, in the last line, how it can’t last. Reading on…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

If only my life was that simple now. Naivete will get me killed. I know who you are human squirrel. ;) everyone who see’s this human squirrel is not an insult. She’ll get it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
theboysimean

lol, he’s not lying, it’s accurate
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Lady Venuquin

Very true and well written too. I like the first line, and the POV really works!
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5