This immediately reminded me of Titanic, probably because I just watched it for the first time last night.

Excellent use of irony/contrast with the reference to the sunlit home.

I do want more! I’m immediately thinking the ghost of Being Human…but regardless, I love that you used external reactions to draw us in.

Great! I also liked the external temp and surroundings to show menace. I did think the use of “icy” and “iced” could have been elaborated beyond ice again. I’m getting a chill…but a good one!