This makes a really nice sequel to the last story, from a different perspective. Good job :)

The first sequel anyone’s written on one of my stories, and I couldn’t be more proud! I love the way you turned it from the view of the girlfriend, and put in that nice twist at the end! I was somewhat confused by the viewpoint of him and Him because I’d have written them swapped, I think. Reading it over again, though, I think it works. Awesome!

Thanks Slightnmighty! It was a pleasure to follow on from your writing.

I did struggle with the ‘him’ and ‘Him’ and ‘your boyfriend’. I wanted to avoid giving them names, like you had in your story, but I’m not sure I took the best approach.