Whoa, this is astoundingly awesome. Each detail is so fluid, not forced at all. I especially like the first two paragraphs.

It might be from the weekend haze, but the fifth paragraph seems somewhat oddly worded.
“A licking of wounds of necks of tines”— I think it might need a comma. Same thing with the next sentence; I would throw in a comma after “antlers” just to split it up a little bit.

Regardless, I still really liked this. The lucidity made up for the lack of commas and stuff.

Good suggestions, Kihd — I’ve made the changes.

Great Job!

Your descriptions are incredibly powerful, and because none of your descriptions were obvious or cliche. It’s always good to be surprised by a writer.

I especially loved the poetry of your phrase, “A circle described by root, shadow and vine.”