Really haunting and beautiful, mate. And I love the reasonable, understanding voice of James, though I hope he would back out before he went through with it, it seems like he has a chance to find a reason to keep living.

It’s probably the kind of suicide note that makes its writer pause for a moment and wonder whether he’s doing the right thing.

How would he go, I wonder? His mum’s pills? His dad’s handgun? A noose? A bridge plunge?

Simple and clear. Easily imagined as something you’d actually read. I agree though, I have the sneaking suspicion he’s going to back out…makes me want to know MORE.

It’s so casual… I agree with the earlier posts, it seems like he might back out, but his words seem so emotionally solid. Ironic, because this is a suicide note…

Great story!