My heart stopped for about five seconds when I read the last sentence and now there’s this painful piercing chill going through to my spinal core. Amazing job, this was freaking bananas! Oh goodness my heart!
My heart stopped for about five seconds when I read the last sentence and now there’s this painful piercing chill going through to my spinal core. Amazing job, this was freaking bananas! Oh goodness my heart!
My heart stopped for about five seconds when I read the last sentence and now there’s this painful piercing chill going through to my spinal core. Amazing job, this was freaking bananas! Oh goodness my heart!
I liked the diversity of the folks you gathered for this. You highlighted the fact that this is part of the human condition with an unapologetic clarity with that. While I liked the ending, I can’t stop the logical part (maybe it’s more my morbid parts) of me from wondering what they did while they bled out. Chat about what brought them to this place? Hold one another? Laugh? Cry? Did anyone hesitate? Over all a great little story.
JayDee
Raphael Bane
Raphael Bane
Raphael Bane
InZanadee
Tina Murphy