Those last two paragraphs are dynamite.

i love this! veryy nice! just a hint. to italizie something, u put an underscore infront and at the end of the segment/word. not the actual word “itaclis” =)

And so my best friend continues to dazzle me with her astounding work…
And you wonder why I love you?
Note:
Stop being anti-social! Make some friends other than me!

I completely agree with Naporeon! This is a piece of writing to be proud of, all four segments. Definitely worth five pencils!

So sad, so true. This piece is absolutely excellent; you manage to make parenthetical comments essential. Great work.

This ficly made my heart ache. Did she leave them/her? Why?
Your writing is brilliant. You convey the emotions in the piece so well. I love this piece.