Lovely descriptions. I totally felt like I was watching a slow motion, multi-angle shot of this accident. Last line got your point across really well, so seems like a good entry into the challenge.

Really great imagery in this piece. Also, I frigging loved that last line.

Loved it. I mean it has the reader looking at all the people involved. Very well written!

This is 3-D writing at it’s best. Clean, crisp descriptions combined with your biting wit make it appeal to every sense. Absolutely amazing!

Sheesh, I could almost smell the gasoline. Great piece.

What a perfect entry for “suicide” by 13-wheeler! Loved “The windshield glazes instantly with a spider web of fractures”. Graphic novel description!