The protagonist seems to be fully and suddenly out of his fog, which is probably necessary…still, it was fun that he had no idea at all. You give some great descriptions, though the one about the road felt a tad too long or just too much crammed into it. Otherwise I felt this had a nice balance of situation, hints at back story and previous stuff while also setting up the next crucial moment.
Yeah, that sentence is a little off somehow. I also changed from third person to first person from one installment to this one. My bad. I should probably fix that.
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