CREEPY. It’s not long or elaborate, but the simplicity betrays the simplicity of thought, which is natural in this situation. I wonder if she’s lying, or if she genuinly has forgotten everything?

CREEPY. It’s not long or elaborate, but the simplicity betrays the simplicity of thought, which is natural in this situation. I wonder if she’s lying, or if she genuinly has forgotten everything?

CREEPY. It’s not long or elaborate, but the simplicity betrays the simplicity of thought, which is natural in this situation. I wonder if she’s lying, or if she genuinly has forgotten everything?

Well, the first thing I say when I don’t want to answer something is I don’t know. I really hadn’t decided if it was one way or the other but I wanted to go for a 1984 George Orwell kind of feel. Thanks for the comment =]

Frightening situation given in a very bare-bones description. Could go lots of places. I think you could have given that last line more oomph by setting it up more, maybe some elapsed time, internal monologue, or even just a description of how it was said.

It originally did have something, but nothing I put sounded right so I got fed up and left it.

It originally did have something, but nothing I put sounded right so I got fed up and left it.