A neat idea, but very sloppy execution. You’ve got words crammed together, and the lack of any kind of line breaks (ie, new paragraphs) makes for a very difficult read. I think a good start would be using Google Chrome or Mozilla Firefox as your browser since they incorporate a spellchecker as you go. Some potential here, just hard to see through all the technical stuff.

Yeah, I realize this. Thanks! I was trying to cheat the limited characters rule. :/