Could probably use a ‘mature’ tag if you’re going to start off with a swear word in the title. The absolute loser’s suicide note? It works, though the run-on sentences in the middle could probably be redone, even if just as choppy little sentences.

Pfffft. Sorry, man. I completely forgot the mature tag. Like… did not occur to me at all.

Your crit is also spot on; it’d really benefit from a cleanup. On the other hand, who bothers with proper structure in a note like this? (I’m lazy.)

I think this covers a good point about the reasons some people leave the world. Being fed up, tired exhausted with life in general is one side of depression few talk about and usually respond to with “Just snap out of it!” Lethargy with Life was well captured in this piece.