Cute new word for the digital age. A little loose on tense, between “When I was being…” and the rest being solidly present tense. It’s semi-justifiable, but I think it would read more consistently with those two lines in present tense as well. Great idea, situation, and new vocabulary word.

Although, I think the movie ‘Bambi’ predicted a similar phenomenon a long time ago—‘Twitterpated’.

haha, very true! I was working with tense and I left it earlier, but it was in later paragraphs. I shall ammend it now I think.

This is the sweetest thing ever elsha you are a saint.

One of the best things about writing is coining new words. :)

Having been “InChatuated” a few times myself I think you have spawned new verbiage my chat friends and I will understand.
Sweet!

Just popping in to give you a solid 5 out of 5

Wow. Sounds like one of my imaginary relationships.

Very nice, Elsha.

Sorry it took me so long to comment on something in my own challenge! I partially agree with the usage of the tenses, but I don’t feel like it detracted from the story that much.
I really like it. It paints a very realistic relationship, with the highs and the lows. It’s very enjoyable!

I love it, Elsha. <3 So well written and real.

perfection

I’m in the chat room chatting off, don’t bother me.