What I really love about this is the surprising coldness of the phone at the end — an almost alien response to the sadness of how loved ones call to hear his voice on the voicemail. It really brings home that the narrator is not human.
I love the thought that our cell phones are the in between man when we talk to others. The ending surprised me and the phones function became obsolete. Cool Story!
Jim Stitzel
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