Dropped a word in the first paragraph. I’m pretty sure you meant “much of the city could fit in the palm.” A great beginning with very rich word pictures!
Dropped a word in the first paragraph. I’m pretty sure you meant “much of the city could fit in the palm.”
A great beginning with very rich word pictures!
“The open hand closed into a fist. It was intolerable.” This line was like a bell tone, ringing home the power of your writing style.
Jim Stitzel 
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