Hurray! I love your use of present tense inside his mind. It works very well, helps with the disconnect that he’s having.

Thanks! It just made sense for “Pyschic Assault.” Looking forward to seeing what you do with it from here.

Omg I love you guys! The descriptions are vivid and still we yearn for more!

Well, I’m anxious to see the sequel and how the story develops from here. :)

I think I’ll love it too.