Commentary: I have no idea where this story came from.

Very peculiar indeed. From what I can make out, you label everything with regard to the role it plays within the narrative – whether it’s character, setting or atmosphere…

It almost feels like you’ve broken fiction down to it’s base elements, a technique that could lend itself well to comedy perhaps – as is, odd is the only way I can really describe it! MH :)

@Mostly – “Peculiar” and “odd”… high praise indeed! Thanks!