Ooh, it was his betrothed! That’s awesome. Great descriptions, all very much keeping with the dramatic vein I tried to maintain from the first bit. I do hope the castle name doesn’t put things off too much; I needed a dramatic name and couldn’t resist.

I shall have to think of how to continue, or perhaps someone else will jump on board.

By all means! This is all very exciting. The name of the castle is fine. In fact the entire swerve from my initial idea into this utterly different environment is fantastic. Love it!

You two are rocking this storyline. Everything sounds ominous and I get a distinct Midde Evil feel to the world created.