I liked the flow of it, especially in the first half. I was expecting to be metaphorically titanic, but it seems to be about someone on the actual Titanic? Seems to raise more questions than it answers, but that’s the way of poetry, isn’t it?

The imagery, rhymes, and metaphors in this work are very powerful.

Well maybe the metaphor was the titanic. So it’s like a metaphor within a metaphor. Inception.