i think you captured the tension of the moment right before something big goes down. :)

I am several things right now. Among them, confused at the last line, intrigued at the piece, amazed by the awesomeness and ficled by everything.

Thank you for the comments. At least I can know I didn’t make the last lines intentions too obvious. I’ll see if i can make it a tad clearer though. But just in case I can’t.

Spoiler alert
I was tring to get at the idea that the narrator was literally dead, a ghost.