ka boom! A set up for a line… just not sure this one packed the punch you were going for. it was a great night for the poor sap, but a horrible one for her.. I bet she was bored from the stoplight.
Ya.. that’s what i was trying to do with my story “The Box” and its sequel. Kinda have an alien story – but in the size of 2048 characters…
Ya.. that’s what i was trying to do with my story “The Box” and its sequel. Kinda have an alien story – but in the size of 2048 characters…This is really good tho’.. It ends abruptly, but isn’t that how a doomsday device works? I liked it.
I like the undersold line, “speaking for the first time.” Hilarious detail. It makes the prior tour around town even funnier. If this were just some random story, I’d just roll my eyes, but since it’s for the challenge, well, I’m still rolling my eyes…
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