Why you got to write a sad dog story, Centi? Why you got to be that way? I think the last line doesn’t sell it for me, maybe because it’s also the title so it comes off as redundant? But I can’t compose a good closer to save my life, sooo…
Why you got to write a sad dog story, Centi? Why you got to be that way?
I think the last line doesn’t sell it for me, maybe because it’s also the title so it comes off as redundant? But I can’t compose a good closer to save my life, sooo…
Sorry, I wish I could edit that now, I should rather say “isn’t strong enough” instead of “doesn’t sell it.”
I like that the title doubles the last line, it drives home the feeling in such a simple sentence. I think with a little more work, this could be something really special.
I like that the title doubles the last line, it drives home the feeling in such a simple sentence.
I think with a little more work, this could be something really special.
Most of it suffers from your usual problems with prose, but then the end… Why you gotta do this to me, Cent?
Most of it suffers from your usual problems with prose, but then the end…
Why you gotta do this to me, Cent?
kick my ass why don’t you gotta go be sad for a while later
kick my ass why don’t you
gotta go be sad for a while later
Sad dog stories? Why would you be that mean?
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