No need to say actually since the old man has not told him a version of the story yet to compare it to. “So what actually happened in my room?” alt: “What happened in my room?”
No need to say actually since the old man has not told him a version of the story yet to compare it to.
“So what actually happened in my room?” alt: “What happened in my room?”
Straight-forward discussion but it still manages to suggest a lot more going on under the surface. Great example of the thriller/mystery genre. Nicely done.
Changes made.
Tina Murphy 
THX 0477 
Robert Quick