So far nothing really setting it apart from Cinderella, maybe mixed with Snow White.
A few points.
1) You can link parts of a story directly together by clicking on ‘Write a Sequel’ to add the next installment to the story.
2) ‘Once upon a time’ clearly indicates past tense, but you’re writing in present tense. Bit of a mismatch, both that one phrase and the nature of the fairy tale genre. And you have a past tense or two thrown in. About 3 blog posts back you can find my rant on writing in the present tense.
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