Haha, awesome stuff zxvasdf! Definitely a good snapshot into the minds of the engineers and scientists who wont with high energy. The ending is rather undefined, but I suppose that is fair in a Ficly – there is only more room to sequel and prequel!

I sent you a note regarding this, but I’m not sure if you received it or not. I’m having problems prequeling a sequel.

I love the dialogue here. It portrays emotion without ever describing the people themselves. GREAT!

Agree with Tina. I always spend so much time describing things. You’ve managed to put together a complete scene without any setting. Well done.