Captures the terror of going down with the plane well. The burning of the scalpe gave it a realistic touch. Great!

Well done. – Pun intended.

I liked this story. Sure the first paragraph is a little heavy and probably could’ve been dived up a bit, but hey, the guy was on fire. What can you say? Re-entering the earth’s atmosphere in a tin-can space capsule isn’t easy to do, I’d imagine.