Comments on The Ageless Ones by H.S. Wift

Kihd

I was going to do that! Blast. But may the fastest ficloid win.

I really liked it! It had a kind of poetic feel to it. I enjoyed the last line of the third paragraph.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
maximumride36

ok, my only complant with this is that you mis-spelt exsist (you forgot the fisrt ‘s’) other then that it was amazing. i can’t think of any other flaws myself. thanks so much for entering this story :D
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
H.S. Wift

@maxride: I really hope you’re joking. I spelt exist perfectly.

But thank you both for kind comments! Much appreciated!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Sir Bic

Interesting.
Nice flow. It sounded like a comic book intro…
THE IMMORTALS!
Now, will that be DC or Marvel?
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Tina Murphy

Interesting contibution to the challenge and will bring new fame to the Immortal word!

typo: There are untoild billions
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
H.S. Wift

Edited, thankees.

One typo in the whole story is pretty good. There are untold billions of words in all the languages, and I can’t spell all the words in this sentence. =D
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
maximumride36

hey guys, sorry about the stupid comment, my friend decided to try and make me look like an idiot by posting that >.<
- Posted over 8 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Bit belated, don’t you think? Smiles.
- Posted over 8 years ago.