Hmm… There is something about the old man that I can’t really put my finger on, but he seems almost guilty about something. He was moving so slowly in the beginning, and then the other character said that “He was the reason I was in this place.”

Very intriguing set up you’ve got going here. Where are you going to take this?

Ah, the old Grandfather of all paradoxes!
Very well done and from a unique and interesting perspective too.