Based on the song “District Sleeps Alone Tonight” by The Postal Service. Also based on a crazy analysis of the song that I’ve read. I’ll let you take it however you want, but I couldn’t find the link.

Okay, glad I finally saw the challenge association. I thought you’d lost your marbles…or my brain wasn’t working properly anymore. Lots of emotion behind the near-nonsense of it all, very angry and unsettled, I thought.
Nitpick: That first word could use a capital letter.

Thanks for the comment! And about me losing my marbles, that is more likely than you think, heheh.

About your nitpick: I was going for a cycle here, so that at the end of the story (notice lack of period) you could go back up to the top and re-read it, like a circle. I didn’t think that it would need a capital letter, since it was a continuation of the last sentenec, but okay.

Again, the comment was appreciated very much!

BRO: my interpretation of this is so awesome. Equals that you are so awesome. Followed by the fact that I think you deserve some kind of horribly amazing award that represents world piece or something. That award is somehow related to this story. Trust me, there was a compliment hidden somewhere.

“The only thing keeping me dry is the single-note symphony looming over our heads.”

Perfect.

Thanks for all the cool comments! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you guys.