I am still picking up the crumbs after spewing them everywhere from laughter!
I loved your half-baked angle and all the missunderstandings made me chuckle.
It works!

ha-ha, thanks.

missunderstandings, good one.

You take home the cake! This is brilliant. Teh Win for shure.

Thanks.

take the cake? I don’t know.
I’d be happy with just a piece of the pie.
=[)

I like the flippancy you gave the private eye. All the name calling works. This should have an interesting sequel – I get the feeling Lois Lane is meeting House.
I’m not sure why you italicized broad… But anyway, I like.

I appreciate the comment.

I thought italicizing “broad” was needed to highlight the difference with “abroad”.

The fluctuations in the voice do seem out of character for a low-key man, though.

Thanks for the feedback. I might edit it.

Halarious!