Nice, poetic feel overall.

Oats and coats, I like it!

I had the feeling that it was just one long reverie after another. A mother lost in her daydreams.

Enjoyed it.

thanks, it was a challenge to write nonsense with no clear ending, just middle. I tried to not have a beginning, but it had to start somewhere.. I just couldn’t pull that off.

I think you pulled the challenge off pretty well, it wouldn’t have been very fun at all if there wasn’t at least some sensibility to it.

To me, this seemed like bantering between a husband and wife. A couple of the paragrophs, like the fourth and fifth, could be from the mom’s point of view, and paragraphs six and seven could be from the dad’s. Just a thought.

I though it was very well written! I liked it. :)

thanks kihd! I love the interpretations!

The tid bits of thought flowed along like rapids! Loved it.

Liked:Buckle Up! More music, less talk.
and Elite birds fly higher, while the inferior crawl in the muck – almost a commentary on life?

Oats and coats definitely took the cake in this. I love your randomness but you were able to address the big problems of society in such a questioning way. :) Good work

Twisting the dial on a 1930’s
radio. It traps sense then nonsense filters through. Very nice.