I have no idea what’s going on, but it’s nicely done, clear enough to follow but still getting across his level of confusion and disorientation thanks to the paradox. Nice job adding onto a very trippy story.
I really enjoyed J. Rein B.’s preliminary ficlet and wanted to do it justice. Yes, I was hoping for a teen-superhero-serial somewhere in the back of my mind. I suppose we’ll have to wait and see if one takes off.