Love all that dialogue and how it moves the action along. Now Phil is on the loose with Fredric? What did he promise Freddy? Now hopefully Khid wants to step in here and continue the story!

typo? A body hitting the floor.
Wouldn’t this sound better if you kept it in present tense? A body hit the floor.

It’s really ambiguous, but I was going for the prez euthanizing Frederick. Because Frederick, the good bud, has got the cancer… I really don’t know what I was thinking when I wrote that.

It is a good incentive for a man to rescue him. I’m wondering how he knew he was there?