I do like this Mr. Varden character you’ve created. His intro a couple ficlets back was very strong. This one was good but I hoped Varden to be a bit more of a mystery. Perhaps after he attached the silencer he said a bit too much?

Typos: I understand this isn’t a “period” piece but you may still want to include them after the Mr., Mr. And if Juliet’s family wasn’t French the mother would have said deactivate (one word).

I enjoy what you do here on Ficly and feel it an honor to write ficlets nearby.

Wow what a compliment thanks you so much

Ok i made the corrections and i definately agreed in the mystery part about the hitman. Thank you very much for your helpful tips.

AWESOME. No, seriously. Fuck yeah. I love this series. Varden’s an awesome character. “The girl I can handle, she’s dead soon anyway. But getting rid of the dog? You gon paaa-aaay!” or something. Loving the synoptic link right back to the original segment.

I think we’re set on characters now. I think this is where the beginning ends and the middle begins, or maybe we’re halfway through. But for sure, the true plotline starts here. Everyone racing time to complete their goals and earn their destinies.

Thanks pj this is getting a little harder i wish i could hit the lottery i’d guy ritchie to write the rest and just plagarise it.

Love the dark humor in this. The visual is great, straight out of a movie I would go see. Also loved the killer with a sense of morality about it.