Well if you’re going to tell something in a disjointed way, a poem fits the bill. Nicely done with a very epic feel to it. I definitely had the Odyssey vibe through most of it, though referencing Odyssues’ Gate, maybe it’s more about the Iliad?

Ooh, so close but no ciggy.

I think someone needs to stop asking what it’s about, and start asking what it is.

Definately reminiscent of Greek epics. Like this very much :)