That’s brutal. I like how the name Kowalski just says ‘cop’ from the first moment you wrote it.

Good job. Enjoyed it.

I like the action and your fast moving depiction of a fat cop chasing a hoodlum.

Did you intend on using “but the boy” as often as you did? If so, would the theme of this ficlet have better been served as – butt the boy instead of tase him? =[)