I… feel like something’s happening here, but I’m not sure what. Is this the origin story of our little superhero?
If so it’s cool.

The dream sequency style of the fic makes me think whether or not isaiah can be a superhero in his dreams, or in reality.

Trippy but sounding a bit forced at times.

The pacing seems a little too fast. You have a lot of good things to say, but building on just one idea would be better, in my opinion, anyway – for what it’s worth.

There is a comic book like feel to this “origin” tale and I think it works with the superhero theme, if that’s what this story will become.

yeah, origin story of Isaiah.

The dream sequency of the fic makes Isaiah able to be a superhero in his dreams and in reality…? Let’s hope.